Virgin Sonnet

This sonnet was submitted to an online journal and received a nearly instant rejection:

Dear Scott Ennis,

Sonnet received, but I can tell you now that it will not find a place on The Sonnet Scroll/Poetry Porch.

Do you have others that you might submit?

Joyce Wilson, Editor

How fitting, that the page is clean and white
I’ll try my best to stain it carefully
I don’t think it will hurt, but then it might
Is pain the way to tell the words they’re free?

Dichotomous, the sonnet is a cage
A prison made of fourteen bars of verse
A metaphor that marks the virgin page
The virgin sonnet could be something worse

Imagine if the words became a song
A lyric made of thin iambic flesh
A page that’s torn, that’s neither right nor wrong
Within a book that functions as a creche

A virgin sonnet only til it’s read
A couplet to replace the maidenhead.

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